Evie: Hi, I’m Evie I’m the journalist who’s come to look round for BBC reports
Evie: So, is there much you can say about Voewood?
Mike: Bugger all, actually?
Herbie: *Aeroplane noise*
Evie: So how many of you are there that live here?
Mike: Just the two of us.
Evie: So what was one of Voewood’s purposes?
Mike: It was a school for a long time.
Evie: Why is it no longer a school?
Mike: There was an incident that meant it got closed down.
Evie: Why? Sorry, if you don’t mind me asking.
Mike: A young lad died here.
Evie: Oh and what’s it used for now?
Mike: It’s just my home.
Evie: Just you and… you’re son?
Mike: My nephew, yes, just the two of us.
Evie: So what’s your name?
Mike: His names Jack, he doesn’t talk much.
Evie: Oh so what’s in here?
Mike: Nobodies allowed in here.
We are planning to film on the 20th December during the Christmas holidays as it has been a hard task managing to find a time when we are al able to get there. Also Voewood often gets hired out for the night and Christmas is a busy period for this so its been hard to find a date where the house is free and we are all able to get there.
The location we are using for our opening two minute of a film is Voewood. Voewood is a very large country house. It’s an arts deco house that is filled with bizarre objects. This made it perfect for filming our movie in because it came across as eccentric which suited the character mike played. We also chose this location as Evie’s mum works at the house and was able to give us the connections to be able to use the house for our film opening.
Evie Holness - the journalist
Michael Holness - the house owner
Herbie Holness - the young boy
We chose Evie to be the journalist in our film opening because she is related to Mike and Herbie and therefore they all worked well together. It was also convenient to use Evie because she would be coming to Voewood anyway and therefore we would not have had tp provide transport for anyone else. Evie worked well as the character because she’s very confident and is able to adapt her personality well to fit the character.
We chose Michael to be the house owner partly for convenience because of the situation with the location availability. Another reason we chose Mike for this role is because he has done acting before so was easily able to fit the character he was given.
We chose Herbie to be the young boy (Mikes nephew) because he again has a lot of experience in acting and he was played the main character in our practice video and we were really happy with his performance and the outcome so we wanted to involve him in this too.
Clipboard
Wooden Aeroplane
Camera-
Notepad-
Pen
Glasses
Walking stick
Rocking Horse
Paintings
Door
WHAT WAYS ARE WE GOING ABOUT ATTRACTING OUR TARGET AUDIENCE TO COME AND SEE THIS FILM?
We have also found that people are more likely to look at something online if it is a video or picture rather than a normal post. So we may think about including a very short teaser clip for people to view. We also need to make this stand out from all the others so people are attracted to it. We could also put pictures of the characters and setting up and give an overview about them so our target audience wants to know what happens to them in the film.
We will also attempt to attract the target audience throughout the film as well. Our characters, setting and outfits are all able to be related to by our target audience. This means that they can put themselves in the characters position, making them feel the emotion and environment around them. This should be able to attract target audience and make them want to watch more.
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WHAT IS NARRATIVE?
Narrative is seen as the art of storytelling. Narrative is the structure of a story line of a film. It's how the film contains a start, middle and end and how they link together. Also the different ways of structure, for example: having the ending at the start then going back in time before that point for the rest of the film until you finally get back to that point and carry on. There are many other ways to structure a film as well. As a result of there is so many films that have been produced, many directors have to come up with new, original ideas so that its makes their work unique and stand out to the target audience from the rest. Here is a typical narrative structure:- Opening: establishes setting and introduces character
- Build up: Relationships established. Development of characters and their world
- Problem: a dilemma or series of complications. Characters are faced with an obstacle to overcome a mystery to solve, or often more than one
- Events: a series of events/action as characters try to overcome obstacle, solve problem, discover truth and so on. Further complications may arise in the process
- Resolution: the protagonists are victorious, problems are solved, truth revealed
- Ending: characters reflect on events, reinstate relationships and look forward.
WHAT ARE THE CONVENTIONS OF NARRATIVES IN EACH OF THE GENRES:
COMEDY...
The narrative of comedy is that it is trying to engage the audience by making them amused and laugh. It is trying to entertain the audience to keep them watching. An example of a comedy would be 'The Hangover'. Throughout The Hangover, there is humour from start to finish. This is done in many different way from jokes to funny props. You don't have to really focus in order to understand the film and the change from start, middle and end is very smooth. Typically comedies are known by starting in the middle of the film plot then starting at the start to explain how they got to that stage then working to the end of the story.HORROR...
The narrative of Horror is that it is scary and sinister, also overly realistic for the audience to watch as they feel that they are in the characters position and can feel heir emotion first hand. An example of a Horror movie would be Paranormal activity' which encourages the audience to feel freaked out as it is very dark and has a realistic plot. This film is an account of a friend and goes from start to end creating tension, giving no hints of what's going to happen or any indication of the future which make the audience use their imaginations and think about what will happen next. A way of doing this is by including cliff-hangers. Horrors are also made to get the audience involved through fear factor and tension. Horrors typically begin at the start or can begin as something 'scary' happens to engage the audience straight away.ACTION...
The narrative of an Action film is that they are fast and packed with lots of different bits of action. This engages the audience by giving them the adrenaline from the action and the tenseness from the 'what will happen next' scenes. An example of an action film could be 'Die Hard'. This film keeps the audience on edge throughout, wanting to know what will happen next. The audience can become really engaged with this film as there is a lot of heart racing scenes such as fighting, explosions and near death experiences. Action films can either begin at the start then the audience sees where the plot has started, or they can also go straight into the action. For example, in Skyfall we are introduced to a character dying and James Bond trying to find and chase the people responsible. Then throughout the first half of the film, we find out everything that has lead up to that point.DRAMA...
The narrative of a drama film is to spread the characters emotion. During the start and middle of the film, Dramas can have any different types of emotion shown from love to hate, but typically at the end, dramas aim to make the audience feel either happy or sad. For example, in 'Toy Story' everything is all going well until Andy gets Buzz, a new, (controversially) better toy. Woody gets jealous immediately of Buzz and he is no longer the favourite toy so the audience feel for Woody. however, at the end Woody and Buzz are friends and it is a happy ending as they made it back home together after Woody was accidently left at Planet Pizza. In Dramas, the film typically starts at the beginning of the plot leading to the end therefore the audience know the build up and can use their imaginations to think about what may happen in the future. Additionally, Toy Story's target audience is mainly younger people, therefore the simpler narrative structure of start to end is easiest for them to understand and therefore makes the film more enjoyable.ROMANCE...
The narrative for a romance film it to share feelings and emotions between the couple. An aim for a Romance is to make the audience capture the moments of love, hate and heart break etc. A usual romance narrative structure would have the start at the beginning, an introduction to the characters emotions such as love towards another, then further on there is typically a change in emotion such as love to heartbreak and it finally ends with a 'happily ever after' or an emotional moment for a character and even the audience if they were engaged. An example of a romance film could be 'Titanic'. During the Titanic the audience is introduced to many emotions such as love, lust and hate during the middle and it finally ending with heart break.. This rollercoaster of emotions can captivate and audience very easily in my opinion and the ending stays in peoples minds for a while which means they are still thinking about the film even after watching.NARRATIVE THEORY - PROPP, TODOROV, BARTHES AND LEVI-STRAUSS.
- Propp: Vladimir Propp broke up fairy tales into sections. Through these sections he was able to define the tale into a series of sequences that occurred within the Russian fairy-tale. Usually there is an initial situation, after which the tale usually takes the 31 functions -https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vladimir_Propp (Under the sub heading: Functions)
- Todorov: Tzvetan Todorov is a Bulgarian-French historian, philosopher, structuralist literary critic, sociologist and essayist. Tzvetan Todorov's narrative theory suggests that all narratives follow a three part structure where they begin with equilibrium, where everything is balanced, progress as something comes along to disrupt that equilibrium, and finally reach a resolution, when equilibrium is restored.http://dictionary.reverso.net/english-definition/equilibrium%20film (equilibrium meaning)These are the steps for all traditional stories:1. Equilibrium (everything is as it should be)2. Disruption (by an event)3. Recognition of disruption4. Attempts to repair disruption5. Return to equilibrium
- Barthes: Roland Gérard Barthes was a French literary theorist, philosopher, linguist, critic, and semiotician. Barthes' ideas explored a diverse range of fields and he influenced the development of schools of theory including structuralism, semiotics, social theory, design theory, anthropology and post-structuralism. Barthes theory was that any narrative can be narrowed down into 5 codes. 1. The hermeneutic code (HER.) 2. The proairetic code (ACT.) 3.The semantic code (SEM.) 4. The symbolic code (SYM.) 5.The cultural code (REF.). https://www.cla.purdue.edu/english/theory/narratology/modules/barthescodes.html (what each code means and how they link together)
- Levi-straus: Claude Lévi-Strauss was a French anthropologist and ethnologist whose work was key in the development of the theory of structuralism and structural anthropology and many other things. His theory was that all narratives could be reduced down to binary opposites. Examples: weak vs strong, boy vs girl and good vs evil.
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WHAT IS NARRATION?
Narrating is what you do when you're giving a spoken commentary on the action taking place during a drama. It's a useful technique when you want to inform the audience of what is happening.Narrating can make a drama more understandable in a number of ways:
- an actor can speak the commentary over the action happening in the drama.
- a character can speak out what they think the audience needs to know about the characters or the situation of which they are a part - this is called self-narrating.
- an actor can just tell the audience what they need to know in-between scenes.
- a character can read or write a diary or letter that informs the audience what is important for them to know about what is happening or going to happen.
EXAMPLES - USE OF NARRATION IN:
COMEDY...
Narration is used in comedies to keep the audience entertained while informing them about the characters and the setting. In the Inbetweeners movie, narration is used to set the scene and tell the audience about the characters. In this film, the narration is spoken by Will - a character in the film who talks about all of his friends current life situation, saying his own opinion and what the others think. this is good because the audience learns about their lives and engages them by wanting to know what happens to them next. Comedy is introduced during this by jokes and 'subtle comments' said by Will. this clip is not from the movie but from the series however there is still narration in this scene.HORROR...
In horrors, narration is used to make the film seem more dramatic and add more tension. This is also used to give all essential background information to the audience. By using narration, it keeps the audience engaged as it makes them guess what is going to happen next when something may have been suggested in the narration. The audience is kept guessing and on the edge of their seats in American Psycho which shows that narration has worked effectively in this film.ACTION...
Action films also use narration as an attempt to engage the audience. In action films, narration is used to emphasise the characters emotions and thoughts during each situation. This keeps the audience watching as they feel like they get to know the character and they want to see what happens to them in the action. Narration can also be used to set the scene about why that scene is happening what happened in the past without having to spend time showing it. Narration is used for al these reasons in Kickass and this could be the reason why it is such a popular film. The audience can feel the emotions of the character through narration, which then leads to an adrenaline rush in scenes like this.DRAMA...
Narration is used in dramas to show what the characters are thinking. For example, in Titanic, the character Rose is the voice over however this is Rose from the future looking back at what happened. This is very effective because throughout the film we learn about her unusual love for a stowaway boy (Jack) and by the narration and dialogue in the film; then by the end, everyone feels for Rose as they have captured her change in emotion when Jack dies. Even thought there was very little narration where Rose is looking back, it is used effectively in the right parts. There is enough dialogue here to engage the audience as well. Many Dramas also have narration where it is looking back at events, this can engage the audience because they get to see a new viewpoint, where the characters talk about the situation and how they feel about it now that it's happened. As a result, the audience is trapped in the situation in scenes like this.ROMANCE...
In romances, narration is used to let the audience know the characters true emotion so that they also feel these emotions. This means the audience can capture and feel the change when different things happen during the film to flip the characters emotions. Many emotions ae felt by the audience due to narration along with dialogue Bridget Jones Diary.WHAT IS REQUIRED FOR A GOOD FILM NARRATION?
A good film narration has to keep the audience engaged to the film while also staying linked to the genre. For example, a comedy film would have narration with things such as jokes and sarcasm; whereas this wouldn't be used in romances as the aim is not to amuse the audience but make them feel the characters emotions, therefore the feelings would be spread to the audience instead. A good film narration also needs to be able to pull the missing pieces of a film together so that the audience get a full understanding of it. This is done by including background information and explanations of why thing are happening etc. Personally, in my opinion, I believe that the best films with narration are those where the characters are the narrators. I really enjoy this because you can feel there emotions better first hand and can see the difference between what they say in the narration compared to the dialogue which I find interesting.ARE WE CONTEMPLATING USING NARRATION IN OUR COURSEWORK?
We have thought about using Narration in our film opening, however we have decided against it due to the fact we do not want to give too much information away. We will engage the audience instead by making them wonder what will happen next and leaving cliff-hangers. We also believe that the characters, dialogue and setting will all provide the audience with enough information to understand what is happening in our film.(LM)
Character:
In our film opening we will only include 3 characters: An older man who lives in a grand house (Voewood), a young boy who lives with his uncle who owns the house and a journalist who is writing a piece on Voewood.
It is very important in a film that the characters are well suited to their role because it makes the movie more professional. For our opening 2 Minutes of film we need to ensure that our actors are well matched and their acting ability does not detract from the overall quality of the movie.
Character 1-
We want to use an older man who looks eccentric. He will play the part of the owner of the house and the uncle of Herbies character. For this part we will either use My dad (Michael) who is 52 years old and is well spoken. We may also use Simon Finch the owner of Voewood this may work best because he knows most about the house. It may not work to use Simon because he has a very busy schedule.
Character 2-
We also decided that we would like to use Herbie, the actor from our practice task. He is well suited the role of the young boy living in the house because he is able to adapt himself to the character. He is the right age of the character we want him to play (10 years old).
Character 3-
Our final character is the journalist who has come from a magazine company to make a report on Voewood. This role will be played by a young women.
In our opening 2 minuets the audience will not find out a huge amount of information about our characters, main storyline is the house itself so its not as important for the characters to reveal too much about themselves. We don't want the characters to distract from the plot so we decided that its unnecessary to make.
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Horror:
In a horror movie I would expect to see frightening scenes that make the a
I think the target audience of horror films would be older teens and and 20-30 year olds. It would be hard for younger people to watch horror films because they may be frightened. People above the age of 30 may find horror films too immature and unesasary.
Sci-fi:
A sci-fi films normally inolve abnormal human characters with some sort of power or magical ability.
Comedy:
I would look for a comedy film to make me laugh and be enjoyable. I think its very importanrt that a comedy film reamins interseting and comical the whole way through, rather than just having short bursts of quality engagment with the viewer.
Comedy films can apeal to all ages as long as the content is apropriate, Of course there are comedy films which are aimed mainly at small children and others are aimed at an older audience. The target audience is flexible for comedy films.
Romance:
Romantic films nned to draw on the heart strings of the audience, I think that a common mistake that occurs in the making of romantic films is they are too cheesy. This makes the film cringey and uncomfortable to watch.
The target audience for romantic films apeal to almost everyone above their teenage years because romance has affected everyone and they can therefor relate to films with this as a focus.
Action:
An action film should include thrilling scenes that make the viewers heart rate increase. A thrilling action film is normally more successful because its engaging and gripping.
Crime:
Crime films often exagerate the crimes that happen everday across the world. Emphasis is often added to the more comical or serious aspects of the crime scene to maker the film more interesting for the audience.
(EV)
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What are the conventions of music in film openings in the following genres?
Comedy:
Horror:
Action:
Drama:
Romance:
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What is dialogue?
Dialogue is a conversation between two or more people as a feature of a book, play, or film.Is dialogue necessary in the opening 2 minutes of a feature film?
No, dialogue is not always necessarily needed in the opening two minutes of a feature film. For some films words and conversation are not needed because maybe they do not want to give away too much of the plot so it makes people try to read into it more and use their imagination. Other films do use dialogue in the opening two minutes because they want to maybe say something that will get the viewers hooked early on so that they want to watch more.Find one example for each of the following genres where dialogue is NOT used and one example for each where it IS used in the opening two minutes.
Action- There is dialogue in the opening two minutes of suicide squad.
There is no dialogue in the opening scene of Ghost in the Shell
Horror- There isn't any dialogue in the opening two minutes of The Woman in Black.
There is dialogue in The Blair Witch Project opening scene
Comedy- there is no dialogue in the film opening of Devil Wears Prada.
There is dialogue in the opening scene of Finding Nemo
Drama- there is dialogue in the opening scene of Inferno.
There is not dialogue in the opening scene of The Revenant.
Romance- There is no dialogue in the opening scene of The Notebook
There is dialogue in the opening scene of Love Actually.
What are the positive effects of dialogue in the example you have used? And what are the negatives?
The positive effects of dialogue in the examples I used are that it advances the story and develops the characters so we begin to see in the first few minutes what will follow in the next couple of hours of the film. In the opening two minutes of love actually it gives us an insight to the character's feelings towards love so we are able to tell that that's what the film is going to be about. The negatives of having dialogue in these film openings is that some people say that it gives away too much of what's going to happen and they don't want that to be revealed that early on. It often does this by foreboding for example in the opening of Finding Nemo we see who we think are going to be the main two characters talking about how much they love their new home and neighbourhood which leads us to assume that something bad is going to happen.What are the positive effects of no-dialogue in the examples you have used? And what are the negatives?
The positive effects of no dialogue in the examples I used are that it doesn't give too much of the plot to give anything away but it gives enough to get the viewers hooked. There isn't any dialogue in the opening two minutes of women in black and this creates an eerie feeling in the film which enables us to tell that its a horror film and it is going to be scary. There is also no dialogue in the opening sequence of The Notebook and it gives us the feeling that the film is going to be emotional and this makes viewers want us to watch more.What issues do you think you would face in your own coursework by not using dialogue?
The issues that we might face in our own coursework if we did not use dialogue is that we would not be able to convey to our audience what our film plot is going to be about. This might result in our audience not being able to engage with the film and our characters and they might not want to watch more.What issues do you think you would face in your own coursework by using dialogue?
The issues which we might face in our own coursework if we did use dialogue is that we might make it boring for the audience. The dialogue might come across as awkward and slightly forced if we cant get proper actors to be in our film opening. We want our film to look professional and sometimes when there is dialogue in the student film openings which we have seen it looks cliché and fake. We want to avoid this so it may be easier for us to avoid using too much dialogue.What is it?
The Fourth Wall is a term for the imaginary “wall” that exists between actors on stage and the audience, to keep up the illusion of theater, the actors pretend that they cannot hear or see the audience. The same effect often occurs in movies, where the fourth wall in that instance is a camera. By breaking the fourth wall, the character is talking to the audience and looking straight into the camera lens instead of ignoring the audience and just letting them watch the events.Examples:
"Ferris Bueller's Day Off"
Is it something you would contemplate in your own coursework?
We did not think about contemplating breaking the fourth wall in our coursework, mainly because our plot is quite serious and would not give the mood we want to create. Breaking the fourth wall often has more of a entertaining effect which would not work with our film. There are also more main characters, rather then just one who would share their thoughts with the audience.
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What is a target audience?
A target audience is a particular group of consumers within the film industry. Film businesses with a wide target market will focus on a specific target audience for certain generes.
What is the target audience for each of the following genres?
Horror - mostly aged 15 to 25 as they are easier to excite and male as they are more attracted to violence and thrill,
Comedy - would mostly appeal to young children as well as parents,
Action - young adult male, interested in action, thrill and excitement - most characters in action movies are male
Drama - young mature and older audience, both gender because there are many types of drama movies
Romance - both genders and nearly all ages, except younger kids. Most people who have experienced a romance in some form so they can relate to the story or fantasies about one, which starts from the teenager years on.
What would be the target audience for you 'idea so far'?
And how would you attract these people to watch your film?
Our target audience
would be younger people from the age of 16 - 20 and probably both genders. By using a young boy, a middle age women and an old man as the main characters we have a person representing nearly every generation which could attract other age groups as well. But because of the storyline it would be more suitable for a younger audience.(PA)
What are the different types of camera shots and angles?
extreme long shot = contains a large amount of landscape, often used at the beginning of a scene to establish general location, also known as an establishing shot.
long shot = contains landscape but gives the viewer a more specific idea of setting and may show the viewers the building where the action will take place.
full shot = contains a complete view of the characters, viewers can take in the costumes of characters and may also help to demonstrate the relationships between characters.
mid shot = contains the characters or a character from the waist up. From this shot, viewers can see the characters' faces more clearly as well as their interaction with other characters. This is also known as a social shot
close-up = contains just one character's face, enables viewers to understand the actor's emotions and also allows them to feel empathy for the character, also known as a personal shot.
extreme close-up = contains one part of a character's face or other object, is quite common in horror films, creates an intense mood and provides interaction between the audience and the viewer.
Why use a selection of shots and angles? How does this aid the storytelling?
Using a selection of shots and angles helps to combine a sequence of images in a more interesting way. The story seems more alive and it is easier to show every aspect to interact with the viewer
Examples of 3 film openings where a specific camera shot/ angle has been used to excellent effect:
Extrem long shot
0:24 - 1:04 long shot
1:04 - 1:06 close-up
1:07 - 1:49 extreme long shot
Extreme long shot
What effect does shorter shot lenghts have?
Like in the opening scene of Submarine, the sequence where he looks in the camera in the end, a shorter shot lenght creates more movement and makes the sequence more interesting. The viewer has to keep up with the different angles and insightes so they pay more attention.
What effect does longer shot lenghts have?
Submarine shows a great example for both of the shot lenghts. In the opening scene most of the shots have a longer duration which makes it just as interesting as using a shorter duration. It is not as active and especially as an opening scene it is a great start without to much movement which would require the viewer's full attention.
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BEHIND THE SCENES of our 2 minute opening practice
- To film a two minute film opening using miss en scène elements that we were given.
The mise en scène elements which we were given were:
- A 5 year old boy
- A boat on the Norfolk Broads
- A mug of tea
- Artificial lighting or neon lights
- A suit
We decided to change the 5 year old boy to a 10 year old boy for convenience because Evie's brother is 10 years old.
We only have two characters in our film opening. One of which is Evie's 10 year old brother (Herbie) and then Evie's mum (Sara). We chose them to be our characters because Herbie has a very vivid imagination and therefore is able to play the role of the character very well. We choose Sara because she is in the correct age range and is actually the mother of Herbie and therefore it is realistic.
We went through with these casting ideas as we felt that they were appropriate for our plot in the opening two minutes.
We were given 'a boat on the Norfolk broads' instead of filming the entire 2 minutes on the broads with a real boat we decided to have a small boy putting a paper boat onto the broads and then his imagination takes him onto a real boat. We decided to do this for convenience because it would've cost us to hire a real boat on the broads. Instead we made use of the fact that we know of an abandoned boat on a beach in Weyborne and decided to use this for the imagination scene. We also have a seven at a park before the boy goes and puts the paper boat on the broads and this scene features his mum. We were thinking that we would do this scene at a park.
Due to circumstances out of our control we were unable to film at our given location of the Norfolk Broads or our initial idea of Weyborne beach. Instead we decided to film at a location near to us, called Broome pits and Ditchingham playground. We choose these two locations as they were convenient for us to get to under the circumstances. The locations we used were very effective. The park we chose was completely empty which added impact to the story because it made Herbie seem more abandoned and alone.
The prop we were given to use was a mug of tea. However we will change this to a flask of tea instead because the character drinking it will be outside so we feel that a flask is more appropriate. Another prop we will use is a newspaper for Herbie to make a boat out of.
We stuck with these prop ideas and used only a mug of tea and a newspaper. After we had filmed the scenes and put the clips together we realised that the headline on the cover of the news paper is about the Syrian crisis. Herbie takes the newspaper and creates paper boats and sends them away on the water. We are concerned that someone may read into this message and think that there was an underlying racist message that we were trying to convey. However we were not actually aware of these connotations and definitely did not set it up purposefully.
The Costume which we have been given is a suit. This is easily achievable for us as Herbie already owns a suit which he can wear for the filming. We've decided that Herbies mum should wear casual clothes that a mother would typically wear on an average day out with her son.
There was a slight issue with the suit that Herbie was supposed to wear as we hadn't realised that he had outgrown it. However we were able to compensate buy him wearing his school trousers, a shirt and Evie's school blazer and some posh shoes. Evie's blazer was slightly too big for him but we thought that this suited the film opening as it looks like he maybe wants to be older than he really is and this is shown by him wearing an oversized jacket. His mum just wore one of her average outfits that she would normally wear.
The mise-en-scène lighting condition we have been given is artificial lighting. The idea which we have come up with is to use glow sticks on the pathway to where he makes the paper boats to give it a more magical and imaginative feeling and to make it look like he was a direction to follow so it is like he already has a path set out of him.
Unfortunately when we got to our location we realised that we had forgotten to bring the glow sticks and it was not really possible for us to go back to get them so we decided to continue without the prop. In the end we didn't feel it was necessary for them to be used anyway as we didn't want to give too much away about the storyline within the opening two minutes of our film.
Our initial plot idea is about a young boy who uses his imagination to escape the boredom of his everyday life. His mum takes him to a playground where she sits on a bench, drinks a flask of tea and just sits on her phone totally ignoring her son and not realizing that he is not having a great time. He sits on a swing which is way to small for him and looks at his mum. There is an old newspaper laying next to him and as he rocks on the swing he kicks it. Looking around his environment he spots a close by river. He makes sure his mum is not paying attention (she is still on her phone), takes the piece of newspaper and runs off to the river. At the river he builds a small paper boat and lets it off very excited. As it slowly sails down the river he imagines a little man on the boat waving at him.
After that he stands on a boat pretending to be a sailor.
In the end we felt that it was not necessary to include the last scene which would've been of Herbie imagining himself in the boat. We did not incorporate this as we felt that we had already revealed enough in the opening two minutes.
Looking for inspiration ('Submarine', 'Miss Peregrine's home for peculiar children', music video of passenger 'young as the morning') |
more ideas that came to Paula which she had to write on a piece of tissue |
Our idea appeals to a wide audience. There are many age groups that would be interested in the film we are creating a video for.
1. The perks of being a wallflower
The film opening of 'The perks of being a wallflower' does not introduce much of the plot. All you can see is a passing-by tunnel at midnight and only at the end of the 2 minutes the key character Charlie is introduced.
Only when the credits stop and the shot of Charlie appears a little bit of monologue starts.
At the start of the opening you can hear the noise of a typewriter which accompanies the first titles of the main actors written in a typewriter font. This links to Charlie's passion for writing which is a main focus later on as he is given a typewriter by his crush Sam.
At the start of the opening you can hear the noise of a typewriter which accompanies the first titles of the main actors written in a typewriter font. This links to Charlie's passion for writing which is a main focus later on as he is given a typewriter by his crush Sam.
The only locations which are introduced in these first minutes is a highway and the tunnel which is an important part of the movie later on and the bedroom of Charlie.
2. Harry Potter and the philosopher's stone
The opening scene of 'Harry Potter and the Philosopher's stone' does give a bit of understanding of the plot but does not explain anything. All you get in these 2 minutes is an old man in with a magical device, a cat which turns into an old lady and a big man on a flying motorbike caring a little sleeping boy with a scar on his forehead.
There is a lot of dialog going on about the purpose of the little boy being there but nothing makes sense so you have to keep watching to understand the opening scene.
The key character Harry Potter is introduced, even though he is at a different age at that time as he is throughout the rest of the film, but the fact that all the dialog is based on his existence clarifies that he is the main character.
In the beginning is a shot of the 'Private Drive' sign, showing that they are in a (normal) living area, which is the only location in the opening scene.
The first two minutes do not contain any credits, only after about 3-4 minutes the credits start.
3. The Breakfast Club
The opening scene of 'The breakfast club' only contains the credits of the film, like director, name of the film, production and actors, with some soundtrack playing in the background.
Student made opening scenes
This opening sequence is a little confusing. It starts with someone typing some sort of article and a bus accidents which is all over news. He then gets ready and walks through London when there is a shot of a building and it says 'Secret Intelligence Service'. It does not really explain any link between the accident and the guy but I'm thinking that he might have something to do with it because he was writing something like a report in the beginning. I do like the cinematography and how they captured the process of him getting ready whilst doing the credits and the different locations of London are captured very nice as well. There is only one key character and no dialog at all, except a reporter in the news talking about the bus accident.
This student made film opening takes part in London and whilst a boy is filmed, walking through the city to meet some guys in a parking lot, the credits appear, which looks very professional. The shots are filmed very well and the greenish filter makes it look like a real movie. The key character is introduced in the first couple of minutes and the security guys and the another man appear very soon after that. There is not a lot of dialog and they seem to focus on body language and action.
This opening scene is about a boy who gets lost in the woods after his car broke down and he can not get any signal. It is quite a typical story and except from the start where the boy tries to call someone for help, there is not a lot of dialog. There are quite a low of locations, like his car, the woods and a house he finds. The boy is the key character and the centre of the video and the only other character that appears in the video is a dead guy he finds in the house. The credits at the beginning are well made I think and the moody filter over the shots work well with the story of being lost and walking through a scary forest and a abandoned house.
"I never had any friends later on like the ones I had when I was twelve. Jesus, does anyone?"
The story of the four boys Chris, Teddy, Vern and Gordie, is the focus of the movie "Stand by me". On their way to search for a missing dead body, you get a great insight in their friendship and the way it has influenced their childhood. Throughout the trip they talk about their lives, cry of laughter and of sadness, tell each other stories and act like simple young boys who randomly leave their homes to wander off on their own.
The older version of Gordie starts off by telling the story of how he and his three friends found a dead body. The flashback of all of them as 12 year old boys starts with them already being in a very close friendship. The way they talk to each other, very relaxed and not thinking about what to say, you can tell that they already know each other for quite a while.
When you are twelve you do not really know what serious things will expect you when you are older and I especially remember the summers when I was younger, where I lived each day without thinking about the next, and I think that is what Gordie and his friends did. The idea of finding a dead body would seem ridiculous when you are older, but when you are still a child you do not think about any consequences and just do it.
In your childhood you go through many changes and experiences that influence the outcome of you as a person. Especially their relationship to their dads is a main topic and something they seem to worry about. Their dads are their biggest role model even though they do not have the best impact on their sons. Gordie's dad blames him for staying alive and thinks he should be dead instead of his brother and Teddy's father is know as being a 'loony'. Still they are both defending their dads because they are a big influence on their childhood.
The film gives a great impression of how it feels to be young and enjoy your childhood. Thinking about my younger siblings, who grow up with social media and smartphones, I feel very sorry for them for not experiencing such great adventures.
"All people ever see is Marilyn Monroe. As soon as they realize I'm not her, they run."
(How do I as a viewer engage with the character Marilyn?)
I personally think that Marilyn is a misunderstood character. Everyone expects her to be a serious woman because of her success, but no one really makes the effort to try and understand her as a human being. Especially on set and with all the production members, she feels very insecure and constantly needs reassurance from her acting coach Paula, and the obvious disappointment of some people on set create even more pressure to be the Marilyn everyone exspects.
In the spotlight of everyones attention, she knows how to fulfill the stereotype of being the sexy, naive blonde woman and she embrasses the new identity she has created herself. Although she knows how to pose and show her body, she does not know how to show what is going on inside of her, so no one seems to take her seriously. What people often do not get is that behind all the show is still is a personality and feelings that can get hurt. In the end it is just a new identity that hides the real one from the world of fame.
Instead of thinking of her as an annoying and attention seeking character I feel empathy for her. I feel sorry for the way the lets other people make her feel, but even more for the way she makes herself feel. She is full of insecurities because no one ever told her how to stand up for herself. Moving from family to family and without a mother to tell her how truly amazing she is, she never learnt anything about true friendship or love, never had the experience of real trust and there has never been anyone to guid her to be herself and loved her for the way she was and not for Marilyn and her success.
On the one hand she is that very insecure woman who trusts others far to easily but on the other hand she totally knows her effect on the male population. Growing up as this naiv woman, the only way to cure her self doubts are compliments and because of her effect on man she always thought that these compliments are a way to make her feel better, but truly they make it worse. She is not seen as a person, but as an object which is nice to look at and supposed to be sexy all the time and because she was never told about her true worth as a woman, she believes all these comments about her appearence and forgets that she is worth more than just her looks.
At the point where Colin and Marilyn built up a close relationship, she relies on him in her worst moments, when anxiety and depression kick in. He makes her happy, laugh and see things differently, but just like her identity, she changes her mind about him many times. I think sometimes she uses Marilyn as protection, as something to hide behind. When she was on the trip with Colin, where they visited the castel, she has really been herself. On the way back you could see how her mood dropped and how presumably her self doubts came back to her because she knew that this was just a distraction from being Marilyn.
I think all in all she was just a woman that had to grow up and become independent far to early. You can tell that by the way she changes her mind and her mood throughout the movie and I do not think that she does all that because she needs the attention and likes to be the center of everything. I think it is the opposite, because all the people and all the expectations are far too much.